As helpful as this is...
... it lacks a lot of flair. If you have the chance to work on another one, I would try to make it more appealing rather than just a white background with black lettering.
Otherwise, I'm sorry to say it'd be just as useful as a basic text file or page as compared to a flash file. If you have the tools to make something look visually appealing (such as flash), you've got to make the effort.
The only problem I had with it was the fact you're practically unstoppable after you have all the power ups. I had to stop playing after I got past 24 levels, 70 archers, & 3500 health. The only suggestion I make is make the game more fast paced and A LOT more enemies range wise.
Awesome game though, I enjoyed it a lot, and I hope to see more from you soon!
I play this game off & on when I'm bored & can't stop until I finally beat each & everytime. Which is signs that it is indeed, a very good game. My only complaint is in hard mode, after passing RC Cola Clock, I jump on the yell platform, & for some reason, I can't just past that point. The game literally creates an invisible wall blocking me from beating the game in hard mode. Am I the only person who has had this problem?
The mix of poetry & the imagery was fantastic. The music was somewhat hyponotic & went with the flash. Good job.
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